Pretty Crazy

Hi Jessxrawkz! I'm going to be honest but not too harsh ok? :) You seem to have a good idea here, but it does need a lot of work. OK ...

Very interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes. :smt003

Yes . . . it does captivate me . . . go on . . . :shock:

I think it's a good start. I love horses and I look forward to the rest of this story. Sorry this review is so short. Keep writing! :D

If I'm working on a story I'm slower so I type like 300 words in 20 minutes. :lol:

Gabriel's Horses, book one by Alison Heart. Awesome author!

You say person's name I've never heard of, I think wicker basket. :roll:

hmm... 8/10 It's pretty. :D Now, what do you people think about mine?

I love it!! It made me laugh and I really enjoyed this. Right now I'm wondering why I love a story about a spoon. Maybe because it's a nice change. ...

Please do this. I'm asking as many people as possible for their opinions. Thanks! :smt003

Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers- Part 2 Fantasy Fiction 1431 words Give me your opinion, is it lame? Boring? OK? Awesome? Best, most amazing thing you've ever read? (Probably not) ...

You don't have to do nitpicks if you don't want to. I just need as many peoples' opinions as I can get. If you don't want to do it I'd ...

Good start. Catchy. It does need work though. The biggest thing I noticed was that you do too much telling and not enough showing. But then the knocking came from ...

OK I haven't been getting any reviews for this so. . . Please tell me what you really think about it. Thanks. :wink:

Whoa, that was dark. Great start though, it hooks the reader and especially this ending: "Why did I start that fire?" I cried. "Why?" Post more soon because this is ...